4/15 : Mrs. Williams final draft on the bowling assignment

Mrs. Williams final draft on her Ethnography was an excellent example for all of us as students in her class. She did an excellent job of portraying to us how to combine the 3 essays into one, without just copy and pasting. I especially like how she split up the essay into different parts that related to each other, which helped with the organization as well as set up a good time line that flows smoothly. At first, i have to admit, i was a little concerned about how i was going to make the 3 essays flow into one without making it sound choppy, but Mrs. Williams constructed an essay that depicts exactly what i was looking for. i can put up each of her essays separately in comparison to the final, which makes it very easy to see what changes she made and what she added or subtracted to help the final essay flow as a whole. i personally love how throughout the semester, Mrs. Williams has had her exact examples of the essays we had to write. it made this class much easier and even more fun than it could have been.